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Post  losttragedy on Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:29 am

Stricken with lust,
My heart shall bust.
Drying the tears,
Never a friend near.

The moon a light,
Only it sees my fright.
Call to the stars!
But, please, don't wonder too far.

It may not be love.
It isn't unheard of.
What is this nightmare,
pain, pleasure and dispair.

Call my name,
For I have no shame.
Stab me in the chest,
Live with the rest.

The pain that is caused,
The dreamed has paused.
A dream I say no more,
Now a lifetime inside these doors.

Why bare all of this?
Why let this exist..
Why not stop me,
Not an I, but a we..

I'm not talking to you,
Nor talking to me.
I'm talking to a few,
More love no one can see.

Moutain eating the moon,
The earth birthing the sun.
The morning will come quite soon.
Nothing to be undone.

Everything is set,
The last tear hitting ground.
Love lost on a bet,
Nothing else to be found.

Can you see,
The owl within the tree.
He knows it all,
Starting from my fall.

I ramble on and on.
Not finding where to stop,
A glow, the breast of a swan,
Finally reaching everything but top.

A moment of lust,
Still hasn't crumbled to dust.
I know it won't change,
This feeling isn't strange.

I'll let it last,
Like I've done in the past.
Two types of pain,
The binds of this chain.

I don't know my mind
It's something I am yet to find.
I do know my heart,
Has been taken apart.

Whether this be lust,
Or if it were love.
I know one very thing,
But, I will never explain.
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Post  Silly3648 on Tue Nov 09, 2010 5:33 am

Excellent poetry, very interesting, and I enjoyed it from start to finish. Keep making poetry, you could probably even write a song.
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Post  JQ112 on Tue Nov 09, 2010 2:04 pm

Poetry + Minecraft = Best. Thing. Ever.
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Post  losttragedy on Tue Nov 09, 2010 8:42 pm

Lol thank you to the both of you.
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Post  MrGreyDeath on Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:05 pm

WHAO!!!!! thats one huge poem Very Happy and yes minecraft+tecno type stuff is good Smile
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Post  losttragedy on Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:12 pm

Lol, if I had an idea what you meant I'd do it?
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Post  MrGreyDeath on Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:17 pm

???
i mean that the guy that made the music originally for minecraft is sort of techno but slower Very Happy
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Post  losttragedy on Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:22 pm

Oh, well this is the poetry thread so I didn't know what you were talking about.
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Post  MrGreyDeath on Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:23 pm

oops i got a little off topic there for a second Very Happy
anyway the guy that made this must have been really bored but its still a very good poem Smile
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Post  losttragedy on Thu Nov 11, 2010 6:36 pm

Excuse me, I wrote it. I haven't seen my girlfriend in four months and gave it to her before she had to go.
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Post  MrGreyDeath on Thu Nov 11, 2010 7:00 pm

wow well GOOD JOB!!!! i couldent have wrote that in like 5 years Very Happy
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Post  Jacval on Sat Nov 20, 2010 12:20 pm

losttragedy wrote:Excuse me, I wrote it. I haven't seen my girlfriend in four months and gave it to her before she had to go.

MrGreyDeath got owned. Wink
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Post  losttragedy on Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:35 pm

Jacval wrote:
losttragedy wrote:Excuse me, I wrote it. I haven't seen my girlfriend in four months and gave it to her before she had to go.

MrGreyDeath got owned. Wink
I'm the one who's single right now! Oh well, time to ... this'll sound harsh for sure ... upgrade. I had the steel, now I want the diamond.
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Post  Jacval on Sat Nov 20, 2010 8:46 pm

Well that's a new one. :L
Never heard a Minecraft pickup line before.
Good luck to ya man! Razz
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